DHG Tanka competition - the result

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DHG Tanka competition 2021
Topic "supermarket"

The winners and the full result of the Kukai!

We congratulate and thank all participants very much!

 

We received 63 texts from 37 authors.

The DHG jury, consisting of Tony Böhle and Martin Thomas, received the texts anonymously and determined the winner in three evaluation rounds.

At the same time, a Kukai was held by e-mail, at which all participants in the competition received a list of the Tanka sent in and awarded 1, 2 and 3 points each to three Tanka; of course not on their own. Of the 37 authors, 34 took part in the evaluation.

The winners of the jury evaluation

 

The winners of the Kukai rating

 

1. space

back home
the beeping of the scanner
still in the ear
I think of vacation
on a lonely island

Silvia Kempen

 

1. space (19 points)

like an army of soldiers
in golden armor
Easter bunnies - no minimum distance
I'll take one
in quarantine

StefanieBucifal

 

2. space

morning routine
an espresso at the kiosk
on the way to work
now at the shop
of the child in the home office

Annika Carmen Schmidt

 

2. space (17 points)

the milk on the cooling shelf
for 71 cents
I do not know
how it feels
petting a cow

Frank Dietrich

 

3. space

Sonderangebote
at the bottom of the shelf
in front of my eyes
the exposed approach
a Poritze

Wolfgang Rödig

 

3. space (15 points)

In the display
a book next to cookware
about bear hunting.
I've been hungry since childhood
nothing more breastfed.

Volker Friebel

 

4. space

the milk on the cooling shelf
for 71 cents
I do not know
how it feels
petting a cow

Frank Dietrich

 

4. space (14 points)

morning routine
an espresso at the kiosk
on the way to work
now at the shop
of the child in the home office

Annika Carmen Schmidt

 

5. space

slowed down
from Covid-19
nobody drives anymore
with the shopping cart
in my heels

Friedrich winemaker

 

5. space (12 points)

she doesn't ask
where everything comes from
nachts
in containers
behind the supermarket

Claudia Brefeld

 

 

Here are the other Tanka with the number of points achieved at the Kukai:

 

11 points:

Sonderangebote
at the bottom of the shelf
in front of my eyes
the exposed approach
a Poritze

Wolfgang Rödig

 

10 points:

Beluga lentils
missing again
all the people around
who share my taste
it should make me tolerate

Valeria Barouch

 

9 points:

Weekly shopping
how the light is reflected
on the grapes
at the parking lot the beggar asks
after one euro

Hildegard Dohrendorf

 

8 points:

in the shopping cart
between pasta and fruit
the toddler
from the chocolate
only the empty shell

Sylvia Bacher

 

had to wait
spent the rough nights alone
but now he is drifting
finally ... the Barbara branch
from the supermarket

Gabriele Hartmann

 

7 points:

My longings
carefully packed and stowed away
in the shopping cart
the sun over the parking lot
already tilted deep to the west

Vera Siminger

 

6 points:

He blocks the aisle
a magazine in hand
he doesn't seem to notice anything
he turns the pages, reads, turns the pages ...
now he's just missing a chair

Sigrid Mertens

 

5 points:

Frozen food
he reaches into the steaming chest
and fish something pretty
at home by the fireplace
thaw them - together

Angelica Seithe

 

slowed down
from Covid-19
nobody drives anymore
with the shopping cart
in my heels

Friedrich winemaker

 

4 points:

in the supermarket
the customer at the checkout
is looking for the last cent
deep in her pocket she hopes
to find one more

Pitt books

 

Neighbors chatter
in the supermarket
shortly before closing time -
I stare at hers, fascinated
pulsating mask

Birgit Heid

 

at the checkout
standing in front of her
with mask and helmet
goes to him the dream of the
Invisibility cap suddenly come true

Angelica Seithe

 

3 points:

the mask peeled off
breathe more deeply in a controlled manner
heart and head rattle
chasing through the shelves
in the middle of the children's smile

Susanne Backs

 

in the warm white light
Banana yellow
attracts me ...
just stay at home
a pale taste

Claudia Brefeld

 

Close together
Easter bunny. Whether the child
tried to count?
How still it is! Shopping venture
roll over.

Volker Friebel

 

Pop songs from old times
should I do that
Sweeten shopping -
but I
must cry with emotion

Birgit Heid

 

back home
the beeping of the scanner
still in the ear
I think of vacation
on a lonely island

Silvia Kempen

 

Shopping
in the supermarket
around the corner
the book she wants
still not found

Peter Rudolf

 

With a haunted look
through oases in concrete
stagger in a buying frenzy
Butterfly meadow of yore
Playground of my childhood

Vera Siminger

 

two things with / k /:
sour cherry jam
espresso coffee.
a third: coriander!
only my wife knows what for.

Martin Zierold

 

2 points:

Origami paper
in lockdown
for weeks
I am now the pandemic
don't flee on dragons

Valeria Barouch

 

Early fog fields
the night was probably a little short
his mist lifts

in front of the supermarket shelf
no purchase without a note

Eva Beylich

 

Life on cardboard
Camp on road surface
the wind whistles on it
she opens the liquor bottle
drinks directly in the supermarket

Eva Beylich

 

in the illustrated book
canned goods
by Andy Warhol
I go to the supermarket
grab your coat and mouthguard

Stefanie Bucifal

 

Shopping mile
my child is whining
on the candy shelf

argue at the bird feeder
the birds for grain

Hildegard Dohrendorf

 

Sale Sale
Chocolate bunnies
hobble on the shelves
still in the ear
silent Night

Gregor Graf

 

shopping and
the long line
don't want to end
like the conversation behind me
full of complacency

Silvia Kempen

 

Snowfall outside
Fruits and vegetables inside
Between tomatoes
tempting strawberries
in a special light

Bernd Reklies

 

the princess
gets caught on the till
not in hairiness
she smiles
as if there was a tomorrow

Annika Carmen Schmidt

 

1 point:

in front of the supermarket
das Mädchen
Catches soap bubbles
a note in the wind
Don't forget bread

Gregor Graf

 

Long snake
it's about to be
In front of him the mother
the cashier counts cents
for penny for penny in hand

Udo Mansfeld

 

Open on sundays
Between fruit on offer
Excitement in the corridor
A blackbird in the market
How surprising

Bernd Reklies

 

ein mann
with smartphone on ear
errs through goods receipts
and searches
his shopping list

Friedrich winemaker

 

0 points:

how did they smile
the eyes over masks
gasping for breath
waiting in line
hiding fear in the heart

Susanne Backs

 

the summer goes by
the Christmas cookies
at a special price
Gingerbread and Christmas stollen
smell in Indian summer

Pitt books

 

Splendid
Late summer days.
The Christmas sweets
in the supermarket
shorten my year.

Reinhard Dellbrügge

 

Supermarket entrance.
Per person
a shopping cart!
The masked security man
calls the masked couple to order.

Reinhard Dellbrügge

 

Shelves overflowing
People jostle for cash registers
tired and rushed
Facades from land to land
Emergency exits are wanted

Werner Himmel

 

Several old people
Abenomask * mockery,
in front of the supermarket.
Laborious choosing. Young
People email over coffee.

Saskia Ishikawa-Franke

* Abenomask: An unusable mask gift to all citizens of Japan from the former, later unpopular Prime Minister Abe in 2020

 

Break, the housewife,
the shopping cart full,
looks at her cell phone.
The children come crying
quarreled over sweets.

Saskia Ishikawa-Franke

 

The kale
you drape on the treadmill
spinning fast both of you,
psychotactically in the front store
I scan the offer

Hartmut Kampen

 

Mask murmur
rotate with antifreeze
slowly in the basket -
in the neon light we change
Purchasing - Life Cycle Assessment - Views

Hartmut Kampen

 

Silent threshold,
behind - sorted uncoloured
colorful importance.
My egg carton sober,
timelessly chic - undyed!

Utz Kaspar

 

Supermarket
in front of our garage
free - the too much
Car doors slam
I sweep the market place

Ute till tree

 

from the garden shed
the snow hood
melts
with bare feet
dancing in the sun

Ute till tree

 

With the meat products
there is also a short conversation
to the choice of cold cuts.
Otherwise everything is clearly packed -
and it's quick. Take what you want

Horst Ludwig

 

With such a car
not quite tight the escalator
up with the note
to the super offer ...
There's never something like that again.

Horst Ludwig

 

Father and child
put the shopping on the belt
two cars full
I am amazed - feel
compassion

Sigrid Mertens

 

This paradise has
Anything you want to buy
Before that stands still
disinfectant
Like the heavenly guardian

Ayuko Miyoshi

 

special offer
Action, discount, free,
10% free
Sour chocolates
Which one should eat here

Ayuko Miyoshi

 

Deep black eyes
the Aldi cashier,
a spark of smile.
The line in front of the cash register
she endures with chocolates.

Johann Reichsthaler

 

Shopping after work
short waiting time
at the supermarket checkout
scarce human study
of a study object

Wolfgang Rödig

 

in the flow of goods
Checkout
the sympathy card
past the naschis
all right, says grandma

Sebastian Salie

 

Dream of Capri
Sun and sweet fruits
get in
with the shopping cart
the irgendwoh

Sebastian Salie

 

The unknown
he just speaks like that; between
He asks her about shelves
first after shopping tips,
Roy Black on the home channel.

Michael Rasmus Schernikau

 

Today at Lidl
colorful bouquets
extra bound
Valentin meets Corona
the flower shop is closed

Maren Schönfeld

 

fruit and vegetables
as abundant as before
the corona crisis
When reaching for the bananas
reproachful word despite mask

Angela Hilde Timm

 

now i am standing here
and at home on the table
the shopping list.
what do I want to get?
maybe it will give me another one.

Martin Zierold

 

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